隨著國(guó)際文化交流之間的越來(lái)越密切,出國(guó)留學(xué)的小伙伴越來(lái)越多了,而雅思就是出國(guó)留學(xué)的必要條件之一。雅思G類(lèi)寫(xiě)作分為大作文和小作文,小作文需要大家根據(jù)題目中的問(wèn)題或者事件寫(xiě)一封私人信件,形式可為非正式、半正式或正式。題目包括對(duì)一個(gè)問(wèn)題或事件的描述,以及對(duì)考生需完成的任務(wù)的三點(diǎn)要求。文章字?jǐn)?shù)不能少于150字,建議大家用20分鐘完成。小編最近整理了雅思g類(lèi)小作文的范文,今天就把這些內(nèi)容分享給大家哦,希望大家可以參考和借鑒好的文章的寫(xiě)作構(gòu)思。
一、雅思g類(lèi)小作文范文15篇匯總
1.抱怨產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You havebought a washing machine. First you found that the machine damaged your clothes,and you had it changed. Then you found that the new one seriously entangled theclothes. Write to the manager of the department store to complain about it.2You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
A few months ago Ipurchased a washing machine (Sanyo XQB50-68) from your department store. After afew weeks I found that it had seriously damaged the clothes. I asked you tochange one for me, which you did. Now I want to ask you to change this one forme again.
This one does not damage my clothes any more, but I have found thatit tangles the clothes seriously and when it automatically begins to spin thewater out, the machine shakes so heavily that it stops by itself. In theinstruction booklet you have not mentioned this defect and neither have you toldthe user how to solve the problem. I am quite annoyed by the fact that sometimeswhen I came back from work to take the clothes out to dry, they were stillunwashed. When I at home. I have to tend it frequently to untwist the entangledclothes. Is that what you call your machine “fully automatic”?/Please change anew one for me that will not entangle the clothes. Otherwise, I would ask you togive my money back, or I would complain to the Consumers' Association.
Yours sincerely,
FanYang
2. 抱怨服務(wù)質(zhì)量
You should spend about 20 minutes on thistask. You went shopping one day and you had received very bad service in a shop.You want to complain to the boss. Write a letter to complain about the badservice. You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Much ofmy regret, I write this to place a complaint against one of your shop-assistantsabout his bad service. Yesterday morning about 10 o'clock my husband, I and alady friend of ours came to your shop with the intention to buy some souvenirs.One of the shop-assistants, whose badge number was 29 if I remembered right, wasasked to show us some of the bronze wares so that we could decide which one tobuy. Under the circumstances, it was the shop-assistant's duty to do what wasasked or to explain why he was unable to comply with such a request. Instead ofminding his duty and acting in a polite manner, he turned a deaf ear to ourrequest and walked away murmuring in a sarcastic manner.We wish you wouldlook into this unsatisfactory state of affairs and take steps to prevent arecurrence of offensive conduct of this kind.
Yours sincerely,
FanYang
3.咨詢(xún)信
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You areorganizing a trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales for a group ofstudents from Perth in Western Australia. Write to the manager of Student HostelServices and explain when you want to visit the Snowy Mountains, how long youwill stay, how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you willrequire.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir /Madam,
I am writing to seek accommodation in the Snowy Mountains for agroup of students from Perth.
We expect to be the Snowy Mountains betweenJune 1 and June 12. There are fourteen people in our group, five men and sevenwomen, and a married couple. The five men will accept dormitory accommodation,and the women are happy to share rooms, but the married couple would like adouble room. We hope to keep our expenses as low as possible.
Please tellme about recreational services in the area. The group will bring their own bootsfor bushwalking, but we are hoping to hire equipment for other sports, likeskiing. Some of our group will want to hire geological picks and otherequipment, if possible. We also need to know about access to caves and otherinteresting geological features in the area.
I am looking forward toreceiving information about the Student Hostel Services and otherfacilities.
Yours sincerely,
FanYang
4.說(shuō)明信
should spend about 20 minutes on thistask.
You are studying at a university in England. Your passport was stolentwo days ago. Write to your embassy in London, giving details of what happenedand asking what you should do next
Dear Sir/Madam,
iam writing to repotthe loss of my passport and to request a new one. I lost my passport two daysago at about 8:30 in the evening when I bought three dictionaries at MBCbookstore. By accident, I left my passport at the shop. When I realized what Ihad done, I telephoned the shop, but the shop assistants there could not findit.
I would be grateful if you could tell me what documents I need to sendyou in order to be issued with a new passport. Do you require any passportphotographs, and if so how many? How much will a new passport cost and in whichcurrency would you like me to pay?
I must apologize for any inconveniencecaused and look forward to hearing from you. I'm looking forward to yourreply.
Yours sincerely,
FanYang
二、雅思G類(lèi)寫(xiě)作各分段評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
雅思G類(lèi)寫(xiě)作5分評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):
完成任務(wù)情況:基本上回應(yīng)題目要求;格式可能有時(shí)不準(zhǔn)確; 學(xué)術(shù)類(lèi):機(jī)械描述細(xì)節(jié),缺少清晰概括;可能缺少數(shù)據(jù)支持; 培訓(xùn)類(lèi):提出寫(xiě)信目的,有時(shí)不清晰;語(yǔ)氣可能多變,有時(shí)不得體; 呈現(xiàn)核心信息,但涵蓋不完整;可能有過(guò)于注重細(xì)節(jié)的傾向; 信息有一定組織但缺少總體延續(xù)性;
連貫與銜接:銜接手段不充分,不準(zhǔn)確,或過(guò)度使用; 缺少指代和替換,顯得重復(fù)過(guò)多;
詞匯資源:使用有限詞匯量,但只是在最低層面上滿(mǎn)足題目;
語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的范圍和準(zhǔn)確性:拼寫(xiě)和構(gòu)詞法上可能出現(xiàn)明顯錯(cuò)誤,造成讀者的某些閱讀困難; 只能使用基本句子結(jié)構(gòu);試圖使用復(fù)雜句,但復(fù)雜句的使用準(zhǔn)確性不如簡(jiǎn)單句; 語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤較多,標(biāo)點(diǎn)有誤用;錯(cuò)誤造成讀者的某些閱讀困難。
雅思G類(lèi)寫(xiě)作6分評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):
完成任務(wù)情況:根據(jù)寫(xiě)作任務(wù)要求作文; 學(xué)術(shù)類(lèi):進(jìn)行了概括,信息選擇合理; 普通培訓(xùn)類(lèi):寫(xiě)信目的基本清晰,語(yǔ)氣可能有不夠一貫之處;呈現(xiàn)并說(shuō)明核心信息,但細(xì)節(jié)可能不夠相關(guān),不適合或不準(zhǔn)確
連貫與銜接:信息和觀點(diǎn)組織連貫;文章有延續(xù)性;銜接手段使用有效,但是句子內(nèi)部和句子之間的銜接可能有誤或過(guò)于機(jī)械; 指代關(guān)系可能不能總是清晰、合理地使用
詞匯資源:使用適當(dāng)范圍的詞匯;試圖使用較不常見(jiàn)詞匯,但有一些不準(zhǔn)確;
語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的范圍和準(zhǔn)確性: 在拼寫(xiě)和構(gòu)詞法上有錯(cuò)誤,但這些錯(cuò)誤不至于影響交際;能使用簡(jiǎn)單和復(fù)雜句子結(jié)構(gòu);語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)出現(xiàn)一些錯(cuò)誤,盡管這些錯(cuò)誤很少導(dǎo)致交流障礙。
雅思G類(lèi)寫(xiě)作7分評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):
完成任務(wù)情況:涵蓋題目要求; 學(xué)術(shù)類(lèi):清晰概括主要趨勢(shì),差別或階段; 普通培訓(xùn)類(lèi):清晰表達(dá)寫(xiě)作目的,語(yǔ)氣一貫、得體; 清晰呈現(xiàn)并說(shuō)明核心信息,但可以進(jìn)行更加充分的擴(kuò)展
連貫與銜接:信息和觀點(diǎn)組織有邏輯性;文章從頭至尾有延續(xù)性; 銜接手段使用合理,雖然可能有一些使用過(guò)少或過(guò)多
詞匯資源:詞匯使用豐富、有一定的準(zhǔn)確性和靈活性; 能使用較不常見(jiàn)詞匯,對(duì)語(yǔ)體和搭配有所了解;
語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的范圍和準(zhǔn)確性:在詞匯的選擇、拼寫(xiě)和構(gòu)詞法上偶爾有錯(cuò)誤 使用多種復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu); 多數(shù)語(yǔ)句無(wú)誤;語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)掌握較好,但可能會(huì)犯一些錯(cuò)誤。
雅思G類(lèi)寫(xiě)作8分評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):
完成任務(wù)情況:充分涵蓋題目的所有要求;
連貫與銜接:清晰而又得體地呈現(xiàn)并說(shuō)明核心信息 信息和觀點(diǎn)的安排有序而富邏輯性; 銜接性的各個(gè)方面安排得體; 分段充分、適當(dāng)
詞匯資源:能流暢、靈活地使用多樣詞匯來(lái)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)思想;能巧妙使用較不常見(jiàn)單詞和習(xí)語(yǔ),盡管偶爾有詞匯選擇和搭配上的不準(zhǔn)確; 拼寫(xiě)和構(gòu)詞法錯(cuò)誤極少。
雅思G類(lèi)寫(xiě)作9分評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):
完成任務(wù)情況:完全滿(mǎn)足任務(wù)的所有要求;
連貫與銜接:對(duì)于題目的回應(yīng)清晰而完整;不露痕跡地使用銜接手段;分段得體;
詞匯資源:詞匯使用廣泛、自然而老到;極少出現(xiàn)小錯(cuò)誤如“筆誤” 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的范圍和準(zhǔn)確性:
語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的使用廣泛、準(zhǔn)確而靈活;極少出現(xiàn)小錯(cuò)誤如“筆誤”。
三、雅思A、G類(lèi)大作文寫(xiě)作區(qū)別
雅思考試有A類(lèi)和G類(lèi)之分,在寫(xiě)作方面,眾所周知的是雅思A類(lèi)寫(xiě)作為圖表小作文,雅思G類(lèi)為書(shū)信小作文。其實(shí),很多人不知道,雅思A、G兩類(lèi)考試的寫(xiě)作大作文部分,也有一些微小差異。下面詳細(xì)列出這些微小的差別:
1.題目難易程度
如同雅思G類(lèi)閱讀難度低于A類(lèi)閱讀難度一樣,雅思G類(lèi)的寫(xiě)作大作文部分難度較A類(lèi)也有所降低,作文題目清晰易懂、容易理解。對(duì)比如下:
G類(lèi)大作文: Some students travel abroad for one year before starting university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?
A類(lèi)大作文: Some people think that space exploration is a waste of money and the funds should be relocated to other more needed areas. To what extent do you agree?
A類(lèi)寫(xiě)作在命題方面通常會(huì)有更深一步的討論。
2.主題難易程度
雅思G類(lèi)寫(xiě)作主題文章的主題更常見(jiàn)于生活類(lèi),如家庭、社會(huì)、學(xué)校、工作等。而在雅思A類(lèi)寫(xiě)作中,話題內(nèi)容相當(dāng)廣泛,在涵蓋G類(lèi)寫(xiě)作的基礎(chǔ)上,更涵蓋了宇宙、科技、教育、經(jīng)濟(jì)、醫(yī)療、旅游、政府、城市、犯罪等等,如此寬泛的命題范圍使A類(lèi)大作文更具挑戰(zhàn)性。
3.范文互通使用
雖然雅思G類(lèi)寫(xiě)作在難度上低于A類(lèi),特別是主題范圍上G類(lèi)范圍較窄,但并不是說(shuō)雅思G類(lèi)寫(xiě)作就不會(huì)出現(xiàn)其他類(lèi)型的寫(xiě)作話題,只是說(shuō)概率較A類(lèi)更低一些,更偏重“家長(zhǎng)里短”話題類(lèi)型。所以,對(duì)于雅思A類(lèi)和G類(lèi)考生來(lái)講,雅思寫(xiě)作大作文是可以可互通使用的。對(duì)于開(kāi)源雅思網(wǎng)站,雖然細(xì)分了A&G大作文、G類(lèi)大作文真題、A類(lèi)大作文真題,僅僅是真題方面的區(qū)分,在準(zhǔn)備復(fù)習(xí)階段,雅思A類(lèi)和雅思G類(lèi)兩類(lèi)考生均可互通使用,做到有針對(duì)性的學(xué)習(xí)。
4.評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
雅思G類(lèi)與雅思A類(lèi)寫(xiě)作大作文部分評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)相同,標(biāo)準(zhǔn)只有一個(gè)。
四、怎么提升雅思口語(yǔ)
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